MajesticBob's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Minortaur]

Hmmm.

I like this. It does look a little... I dunno flat? I think it might be an overuse fo black. Also it could use a background. A background in my opinion would really improve the pic. The head also looks kinda merged with the torso. Otherwise I like it. Well done.

TwistedXP responds:

Yeah i see what your saying. I never realized how little his head stands out. This guy is just a quick 15 minute concept though, so theres going to be some imperfections.

but now i kinda wanna redraw him more detailed and less sketchy to fix the depth problems lol

[[Pencil] A Field of Ice]

I like this.

This is a very interesting drawing. I have only three things that I don't like: Line weight, all the lines are the same thickness and makes the picture look rather flat. Shading: I would love to see more shading. I noticed there is some shading but there could definitely use more. The third thing, Very busy: The dragon, I assume is the star of the pic, but is overwhelmed by the rest of the foreground and background.
However, I find the detail on this amazing! Seriously. The fact it's all in pencil, is impressive. This is better than most color pics I've seen floating around. Keep up the good work.

Fooliolo responds:

I'll be honest, I wasn't sure how to do the shading on the ice. Otherwise, the rest of what you say is valid when going for the eyecandy appeal.

[Streak The Hawk]

Nerd!

It's pretty good. Something bugs me about it though, I can not quite put my finger on it. Level 4 you say? 3.0 Ranger? Also you did not have to sack your spell casting, there are feats for what you did. Wait... I'm supposed to critique your art not your char from D&D... I... I'm so confused.

Kinsei responds:

yeah a 3.0 Ranger gets it's animal companion and spells at level 4. And although I know of the spells your talking about to make the companion more stronger, they wouldn't have been quite as good as what I got in turn.
With permission of the DM, I got me a Celestial Hawk. I named him Streak the Hawk; Rider of the Calm winds. He has quite a few abilities that normal companions don't have. He can cast Smite Evil once a day. Has shit tons of bonuses to spot and hide. has resistance 5 from all the different elemental damages.
I get full communication with the hawk instead of it simply having tricks and basic commands. Then to top it off, the Streak likes to drink alcoholic beverages. He even got in to a drinking contest last game.... um.... he passed out on the first round....
Anyway, I know that it seems that I'm trading off a lot, but I am honestly getting a lot in return. Even with out the spells to help aid me and the party, I think the comedic value and challenge to myself is well worth the trade.

[Big Jonny 13 Tribute]

Looks good.

But as great as it is that is not how you hold a sai. It's meant to be a sword catcher/breaker. Jonny would lose his fingers that way.

Kinsei responds:

I based this off a TMNT pic, and since Raf has his sai like that, I decided to follow suit